hindi tutuo pala
na nandito ka
hindi tutuo pala
na makulay ka
hindi tutuo pala
na mahal ka nila
hindi tutuo
kathang isip
ka lang pala
ngayong bukas na ang
buhay mo
ngayon mahirap
ka nang hindi
magpakatutuo
mahirap magsinungaling
sa harap nang tao
kaya ang tutuo
na lang ang sinasabi mo
ilan ang mga pusong
nasawi dahil sa iyo
ilan ang mga buhay
na nasira sa pagkukunwari mo
ilan ang pamilyang
nasira mo
sumagot ka wala kang
masabi dahil
hindi ka tutuo...
laughs...gosh! a new frontier of stringing words in tagalog that is :> wow, i can do that din pala, laughs...sorry, sa iyo. pero, no harm done kasi hindi ka naman tutuo :) and you know baliwalang poems like this took me only 5-10 minutes to write. i wonder if i have to use my old, half a century coconut say for one week, maybe i can come up with a much more makabuluhan o makahulugang tula, laughs. oh well, but that is stretching it a bit. for my talent? o kalokohan? will really be up to this stretch, it's mine so who should be in a better position to know? me... *}
and pardon for this poem? just cracks me up on my re-reads laughs. so serious but actually it is just very funny to me. yes ladies and gents as if i am being read by anyone here. sometimes us knowing the truth of things is a relief and freedom from bondage to the lies and the deceits, that is. i think so, laughs. oh well, such is life...full of make believes. so be very careful, you people out there :)